Yesterday it was the last day of school - and for the past couple of days my son came home with tons (I mean *tons*) of papers, books, notebooks, art items - all the work he had done over the year.
In there - a piece of paper, with a poem. At first I thought they copied it from somewhere... then I relized it has been written by our 9 yo.
I think they should ask all kids in every grade to write one - it's an amazing self-portret!
I Am Poem
I am creative and caring
I wonder about how many universes there are
I hear the roar of a plane's engine
I see bubbling test tubes overflowing
I want lots of Lego
I am creative and caring
I pretend that the world is peaceful
I feel a snake's scaly skin
I touch the window of a spaceship
I worry about needy people
I cry when a loved one dies
I am creative and caring
I understand that everything is possible
I say "you control your own happiness"
I dream of being a scientist
I try to do my best in school
I hope the world will stop fighting
I am creative and caring
by William Marinache
Wow!!!
ReplyDelete:) my feelings echoed...
Deleteso thoughtful for someone so young ... I always find my kids see the world without a filter and just 'tell it like it is' .. very refreshing
ReplyDeleteYes, all we need to do is to listen to them :) I love watching him observing the world around us!
DeleteHow wonderful. I hope he keeps on writing more. Thanks for sharing. Dita.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Dita - I will try to have him write one of these poems around his birthday every year (for as long as he'll agree :)) - it'll be an interesting 'evolutionary' compendium :)
DeleteWhat an insightful young man. His creative and caring attitude reflects on good parenting I would think!
ReplyDeleteOh, Katherine, thank you - we did encourage him to be open... the caring comes from inside, though, he's always been very emphatic, much more than his age...
DeleteDacă n-aş fi ştiut cine a scris, n-aş fi ştiut unde să încadrez ( deşi nu e cel mai plăcut luccru pentru nici un Om de-al artei, oricare ar fi ea) : aduce a Jacques Prevert şi amulţi alţii , cu ani mulţi de scriituri de calitate ! Iar zic, aproape că mă sperie ...
ReplyDeleteSucces şi la mai mare !
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